I need Opinions!

I am writing a new story, lol  I have like twenty different stories wriiten in notebooks in the last year, and I need help if the idea of this one really get people's interest. This one was my favorite story plot I ever made cause it involves true love, action, and loyalty.

It is called Moonlight Tears and It involves a man name Lorance Gardener. A normal man with powers that are fueled by a full moon, but along with a handful of people. This power feasts off a part of his body. Being as the power is in his blood he is drain of blood, with his body in a weaken state as he protect his village from terrible blood feasting Pixies a woman by the name of Angel appeared. Saving him only for him to learn she is a runaway from a heavinly palace with a rare ability. Ordered by his mother to take the girl and flee. Lorance and Angel fall in love with each other.

Only near the end Angel uses her power to grant Lorance Immortality to allow him to live when he reaches the urges of death. Dieing in his arm promising to love him through out the next life. With her promise piercing his heart. Lorance forever protected her grave and pronouced his love and soul to her only. Bringing forth the moonlight tears and their sorrow...


OKAY!! I need opinions here! I love the plot, but I want to see if other people do too cause I want to type this on my labtop, print it, and try submitting it to try getting it publish. My dream is to get one of my stories published! Also I don't want anyone stealing this because I put my heart and soul into writing in my notebook!